Simon
and Jane, back at the Grey House, are getting worried since
Barney's no where in sight. The carnival has apparently moved on,
and they can't think of anywhere else he would go. Things
get worse when Rufus arrives without Barney, looking oddly apathetic
and disinterested. He's also moving slowly and strangely when Jane
and Simon end up following him out to the harbor.
We
flash over to Barney, who is definitely under some form of
mind-control.
“He
no longer had any thought of his own; it was a strange, relaxed
feeling, as if he were comfortably half asleep. There could be no
argument now. No fighting. He knew only that the tall dark figure
walking by his side, wearing a wide-brimmed black hat, was his
master.”
Barney
may not be able to think for himself, but he can still see and hear.
So, the reader hears along with him that they are heading down to the
yacht, and that “our old Cornish friend” (Mrs. Palk, I assume)
is responsible for getting everyone away from the harbor so that they
won't be seen.
Fortunately,
at that moment, Rufus saves everyone! Well, he howls “a long weird
note so unexpected and anguished that for a moment they all stopped
dead.” I'm not quite sure how that happened or what it signified (animals don't like The Dark?) but it works: Barney snaps out of the mind control and flees, rejoining
Jane and Simon; they all race back to the Grey House, where the front
door has just locked itself behind them. Taking temporary refuge
behind the garden walls, Barney organizes his now-conscious thoughts
from the last few hours, and realizes that they need to get the
grail. Now.
Bill, Hastings and the Withers are watching the house and headlands. Trapped in the garden, Barney and Jane compare notes,
and determine that the building Barney was in is the vicarage Jane visited-- though
he's convinced that Hastings isn't actually the vicar.
With
their route towards the headland blocked, Jane suggests waiting for
Merry (a good idea if, say, they were in a place of relative safety,
but they are currently outdoors, surrounded, and outnumbered, and why
does she keep having to be the wet-rain-cloud-of-hopelessness?).
Simon
gets a moment of insight, and suggests that they can take advantage
of the extremely low tide to try to reach the cave under the
headland. They can walk there from the harbor, along the exposed
rock. Jane's immediately back on task, noting that it was high tide
when they heard the sea in the cave, so the entry was likely was
still covered then, but it may be uncovered now, like all of the
rocks. The two of them convince Barney, and Simon comes up with a
plan for evading capture by approaching the rocks from an unexpected
direction (through the next bay, where they normally go swimming).
Barney
expresses concern for Great-Uncle Merry worrying about them, and I
immediately dislike Simon again (a bit) for pulling rank as the
eldest. He has a point that they can't look for both Merry and the
grail, and taking Merry's absence as a sign of unconcern is
understandable. However, under the circumstances, I'm surprised no
one's fearing foul-play, or pointing out that they already looked for
Merry (without success), and they've also been searching all likely
places for Barney. Where else could they look for Merry at this
point?
They
reach the beach, but their moment's rest is disturbed by an "owl" call--Jane recognizes it as the enemy's signal from the night on the headlands--and the kids run for the tide pools.
We get another weird interlude between the characters: Jane's “motherly”
concern is finally heeded (to get Barney to wear his sandals on the
sharp rocks), but Simon, somehow, still can't resist teasing the
others about ravenous fishes in the deep pools. With everything else
going on that they have to actually fear, this inability to not stop
taunting the others seems like a real personality problem. I'm not
buying it as a reaction to stress, as he did the exact same thing
when they first arrived in Trewissick (mocking Jane's motion
sickness), and in the attic just before Barney found the map (talking
up rats).
May I
also say that it's bothering me how quickly Jane goes from
resourceful and clever to designated pessimistic nay-sayer, and back?
Maybe I'm expecting too much of a young character, but she's utterly
awesome for long periods, and abruptly becomes the voice of
hopelessness and worry when needed as a foil for Simon or Barney,
then bounces right back to solving problems. Characters and people
can be complex, but I don't care for how it's handled here.
The
next section's pretty tough for that: Jane is worrying that Barney
should have stayed behind (Where? In the garden surrounded by people
whose mind-control he just escaped from?) on account of the pool
depth, fretting about the narrow cave and the lack of light, and
wishing they had a rope in case someone gets lost. Simon's now the
thoughtful, prepared one (apparently), because he thought to grab
some fishing line, a candle, and matches after their adventure with
the hole under the stones. Jane also gets to fret about Barney going
into the cave (after he's pointed out that, as the smallest, it'll be
easier to for him than for anyone else). At least she's allowed to
come up with the idea of using certain numbers of rope pulls to keep
track of time/tide and to indicate trouble.
And thus ends chapter 13.
And thus ends chapter 13.
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